可能有错误,请指教: You of the level is in fact higher than me, because I am during the period of universitied to learn but can't write well, and you did not suffer the specialized training can however write so good. [你的水平其实比我高,因为我在大学期间学过而不能写得很好,你没受过专门训练却能写得这么好.]
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我在这里忠心建议,似乎‘因为’应该去掉才通你的水平其实比我高,我在大学期间学过而不能写得很好,你没受过专门训练却能写得这么好In fact your level is higher than mine,though I studied it in the college,I cannot perform well now 。You do it so well even though you do not have special training。You of the level(此处不妥,英文中表达不通) is in fact higher than me(这里应该用mine是指我的水平,不是我), because(这里因果不妥,应该用让步状语从句) I am during the period of universitied(in the college就可以了,universitied这个是动词应该用名词) to learn but(缺主语) can't write well, and you did not suffer(不能用Suffer这个词只能用在遭受痛苦的时候,很明显此处不行) the specialized training can however(只能用在句子衔接处不能用在这里) write so good(实意动词后用副词WELL)。我乃一孔之言望请赐教。。
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我怎么看没呢?