平时月考作文都能得17分以上!可这次高考作文就得6分!郁闷死了!!要不就能走了,现在复习了,教材又改了!!!
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如果你这次只得了六分,只有两个原因可以解释.一个就是可能你跑题或者是偏题了,要不就是你并没有包括要写的要点,或语法错误非常多.总之应该是一个"意外事故".但你也不要过于难过,其实没准今年好好复习,明年会考上一所非常理想的学校,你还要感谢上天给你的这次机会呢!下面说说写作,主要遵循几个步骤:1.认真审题,特别留意图中的有些提示和画面外的要点.2.列提纲.由于时间有限,也许我们不能写草稿.但为了保证文章有条理,至少应该在卷面以外的地方列一个要写什么.3.在抄在作文纸上之前,先组织一下语言再动笔.我们可以用很多中方法表达同一个意思,写之前想想哪种表达更好.4. 注意卷面的整洁.另外,平时多看课外英语读物,并积累一些好词好句子也是一个非常好的做法.俗话说:"巧妇难为无米之炊."嘛!所以一定要有一定的储备.祝你好运!方老师
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ISSUE写作快速入门第一节 ISSUE写作特点?45分钟的“观点陈述”题(“Issue”task)，要求考生在规定时间内，从两个给定的论题中，选择一个，从某一角度表明自己的观点并进行有理有据的分析论述。Present your perspective on the issue below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views。（摆出你关于下面论点的观点，并使用相关的论证和例子证明你的观点。）?ISSUE主要是要写的充实、丰满，论述要有根据，要是用多种论证手法。ISSUE在入门时，可以通过本书提供的基本的ISSUE模板，写出框架、提纲。然后，再看看其他人的思路、举的例子。从而完成入门的写作。第二节 ISSUE模板1、支持第一段：我们经常遇到这样的问题，第二段：我之所以这样认为，。。。论证（某某说过;“”。某某曾经做过什么）（引用法、举例法）第三段：如果我们这样做了，那么，就有什么结果（某某这样做了，如何如何）（引申法、举例法）第四段：如果我们不这样做，就会如何如何。可能出现什么情况。（反证法）第五段因此，这样很重要。我们要努力向这个方向发展。未来会更好。2、反对：第一段：人们常常认为A，我觉得，表面上看，A似乎有道理，实际上，有很多问题。我认为，B。第二段：我之所以认为A不对，是因为。论证（某某说过;“”。某某曾经做过什么）（引用法、举例法）第三段：如果我们按照A这样做了，那么，就有什么后果（某某这样做了，如何如何）（引申法、举例法）第四段：如果我们不按照A,而是按照B，就会如何如何。可能出现什么情况。（反证法）第五段综上所述，A的观点不正确。B才是正确的。我们要努力向B的方向发展。3、混合评价第一段：在日常生活中，人们遇到…。。的问题，有着各种各样的观点。有些人认为，…，有些人认为，…。我认为两者都很关键。我们需要寻找一种平衡。 第二段：A很重要，论证（某某说过;“”。某某曾经做过什么）（引用法、举例法）第三段：过度的A也会有危害第四段：B也很重要，没有B也不行（举例子）。（反证法）第五段综上所述，要寻找一种平衡。我们应该按照AB平衡的思路发展。第三节 常用的论证方法1、举例子A、名人的例子。如伽利略（Galileo）从斜塔上扔下两个小球，推翻了亚里士多德(Aristotle)这个权威认为的重的物体下落快的错误观点，就可以用在下面的论题里面（142"The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority。"）本书列出了常用的名人的事迹中英对照，还有参考使用点。B、普通人的例子。可以大量使用。当你想说明一个道理时，就可以发生在自己身边的事情（可以杜撰）。2、引用A、引用名人名言。这个将很有说服力，往往一句名人名言，就可以引出一段。本书列出了常用的、容易记住的名人名言。B、比较普通人的话。这里的普通人，是美国人不知道的人，可以是杜撰出来的，比如“某某博士说过”。用别人的嘴说出自己想说的话，说服力要比自己直接说出来强，而且显得文章论证手段多。3、反证法如果不这样做，会有什么样的后果。比如前面提到的“专家过多，需要通才”，如果要驳斥这个观点“专家虽然多了，但还不够，真正有用的，还是专家。”，就可以使用反证法。如果没有专家，将会是一个什么样子。4、引申法如果这样做了，会有什么样的结果、收获。“如果专家多了，会如何如何。”第四节 Issue主题阅读式备考法范例?"In our time, specialists of all kinds are highly over-rated。 We need more generalists — people who can provide broad perspectives。" “今天，各行各业的专家数量严重过剩；我们的社会，需要更多的拥有广泛知识的通才。”专家和通才的关系，题目认为：“专家过多，需要通才”。?细读下面的ets6分范文：?第一段：提出观点：随着社会的发展，需要在专家和通才中寻找一种平衡。In this era of rapid social and technological change leading to increasing life complexity and psychological displacement, both positive and negative effects among persons in Western society call for a balance in which there are both specialists and generalists。 典型开头，摆明态度。一定要有一个态度。句型收获：In this era of rapid social and technological change leading to increasing life complexity and psychological displacement, both positive and negative effects among persons in Western society call for a balance in which there are both specialists and generalists。（整句都应该背下，很有用）?第二自然段： 专家是必要的。（本段中心句）Specialists are necessary in order to allow society as a whole to properly and usefully assimilate the masses of new information and knowledge that have come out of research and have been widely disseminated through mass global media。 （开始引用名言）As the head of Pharmacology at my university once said (and I paraphrase): "I can only research what I do because there are so many who have come before me to whom I can turn for basic knowledge。 It is only because of each of the narrowly focussed individuals at each step that a full and true understanding of the complexities of life can be had。 Each person can only hold enough knowledge to add one small rung to the ladder, but together we can climb to the moon。" （下面是总结上面的引用）This illustrates the point that our societies level of knowledge and technology is at a stage in which there simply must be specialists in order for our society to take advantage of the information available to us。 句型收获：As the head of Pharmacology at my university once said (and I paraphrase) 引用This illustrates the point that our societies level of knowledge ??第三自然段：没有专家，我们的社会就不能发展。典型的反过来说（ets认为这样可以使文章丰满），和上一个自然段是一个意思。上一段是“专家很重要”，这一段是“没有专家，我们的社会就不能发展。”字数就是这样写出来的。记住这个方法。Simply put, without specialists, our society would find itself bogged down in the Sargasso sea of information overload。 While it was fine for early physicists to learn and understand the few laws and ideas that existed during their times, now, no one individual can possibly digest and assimilate all of the knowledge in any given area。 句型收获：Simply put, without specialists, our society would find itself bogged down in the Sargasso sea of information overload。反说经典。?第四自然段：过度专业化的危害1（中心句）On the other hand, Over specialization means narrow focii in which people can lose the larger picture。（下面是用toe-nails类比论证） No one can hope to understand the human body by only inspecting one's own toe-nails。 What we learn from a narrow focus may be internally logically coherent but may be irrelevant or fallacious within the framework of a broader perspective。 Further, if we inspect only our toe-nails, we may conclude that the whole body is hard and white。 Useful conclusions and thus perhaps useful inventions must come by sharing among specialists。 Simply throwing out various discoveries means we have a pile of useless discoveries, it is only when one can make with them a mosaic that we can see that they may form a picture。 ?第五自然段：过度的专业化的危害2Not only may over-specialization be dangerous in terms of the truth, purity and cohesion of knowledge, but it can also serve to drown moral or universal issues。 Generalists and only generalists can see a broad enough picture to realize and introduce to the world the problems of the environment。 With specialization, each person focusses on their research and their goals。 Thus, industrialization, expansion, and new technologies are driven ahead。 Meanwhile no individual can see the wholisitc view of our global existence in which true advancement may mean stifling individual specialists for the greater good of all。 句型收获：Not only。。。。，but it can also。。简单，但实用。?第六自然段：过度专业化的危害3：在生活和工作中容易产生人们的隔阂。（中心句）Finally, over-specialization in a people's daily lives and jobs has meant personal and psychological compartmentalization。 （下面是举例）People are forced into pigeon holes early in life (at least by university) and must consciously attempt to consume external forms of stimuli and information in order not to be lost in their small and isolated universe。 Not only does this make for narrowly focussed and generally poorly-educated individuals, but it guarantees a sense of loss of community, often followed by a feeling of psychological displacement and personal dissatisfaction。 ?第七自然段：总结等于是把首段再反说一遍。首段：“专家和通才都关键”，末段“没有了通才，社会不行，没有了专家，社会也不行”。背诵下面一段，这种文体的结尾，肯定没有问题。Without generalists, society becomes inward-looking and eventually inefficient。 Without a society that recognizes the importance of broad-mindedness and fora a for sharing generalities, individuals become isolated。 Thus, while our form of society necessitates specialists, generalists are equally important。 Specialists drive us forward in a series of thrusts while generalists make sure we are still on the jousting field and know what the stakes are。句型收获：Without generalists, society becomes inward-looking and eventually inefficient。 Without a society that recognizes the importance of broad-mindedness and fora a for sharing generalities, individuals become isolated。 Thus, while our form of society necessitates specialists, generalists are equally important。?本文结构的分析：?分段：题会文章的结构，给自己以后写作，打下良好的结构感基础。?第一大段：（第一自然段）提出观点：随着社会的发展，需要在专家和通才中寻找一种平衡。第二大段：（第2、3自然段）专家是必要的。第三大段：（第4、5、6自然段）过度专业化的危害，3个。第四大段：（第7自然段）没有专家不行，没有通才也不行。??Reader Comment on 6 ETS的评价，可以看出，他们判分，是从前面我们注意的三个方面进行的。1、文章内容（完整性，观点明确，论证充足。多举例子）2、文章结构（条理性，3、文章文采（句子多样性）?This outstanding response displays insightful analysis, meticulous development, impressive vocabulary and a mastery of the elements of effective writing。 The writer disagrees with the stated opinions by arguing that specialists and generalists are both vital: specialists prevent us from becoming "bogged down in the Sargasso sea of information overload," while generalists provide help to see "the big picture" and, unlike specialists, protect our "greater good。" 1、这些都是内容描述的完整性的评价The essay is carefully constructed throughout, enabling the reader to move effortlessly from point to point as the writer examines the multi-faceted implications of the issue and provides compelling reasons and examples to support the premise and take the argument to an effective conclusion。2、文章结构的条理性。Although other "6" responses may not be as eloquent as this essay, they nevertheless all display the test taker's ability to articulate complex ideas effectively and precisely。 3、文采流畅。。