twenty__fifth, July Mondy sunnyI know many days have been away.But,in fact,I do nothing what I should do,just left sad .well ,what should I do?Learning and learning. I think I may be a girl who is lazy. If I am a lazy girl ,I'lllearn how to be a hard_-working girl to finish my dream Or I'll be sader and sader and lose the confidence in the end.各位朋友，请帮我看一下。指出不足！包括写法，用词，表达等。谢了！
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Monday, July 25th, 2005 SunnyTime flies!Many days' gone! I've done nothing that I should do, but feel sad. At present what should I do is study and study...I am lazy, I thought.In this case, I shall become to work hard and fulfill my dream or I would more and more unhappy, and at last lose confidence.
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想法不错，可惜英文的文章(日记)不是这样写的。建议多参考英文书,看看人家的格式和表达方法。你的东西只是中国式思维的结果，我们当然都看得懂,可是"非常"不地道。真的!自己琢磨吧!
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Mnoday, 25th July，sunnyI know many days have past。But,I didn't do any of the things I was supposed to do。 Instead, I'm just here, feeling sorry for myself。 On the other hand,what should I do? The only word left in my world is study, study, study。I guess I am lazy。If I am a lazy girl ,the I'll learn how to work harder to achieve my dreams。 Otherwise I'll just be sadder and sadder and lose my confidence in the end。