需要60个词的英语回答

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I had a wonderful childhood。 I was born in Shanghai。 That's quite a good city。 My parents used to play with me and teach me everything。 They helped me to build my first friendship。 So I got many friends at that time。And they always took me out to some places。 When I was only 5, they took me to Beijing to see The Great Wall。 When I was 7, they took me to England to see the beautiful scenery。 That was really a wonderful childhood, was't it?根据你的要求,我先写一篇。。。。说明一下,我英文也才学了3年半而已。只不过在国外呆了半年,也许长进会多一些。出国前我在国内也算是成绩很好的学生(不是我吹牛,奥数也常考高分)现在在澳大利亚比较空,除了自学以外也没太多事情,所以常上网学点东西。但我不是专门挑错,只是看到您的文章错误较多,所以提了出来。。。至于说话时太直了点,我必须对你说:对不起。还有一点我想我有必要指出,不能让elen有误解,在高考或中考的英文作文考试中,任何语法错误都会被挑出来,而且会扣分,语法在国内考试中是必须过的一点,任何错误都会导致扣分,特别是中考和高考时。

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:) all of you are so good , and glad to see you in so many questions。谁的冷泪 Please don't care about other people point out your mistake。 It's a good way to improve your English with talking to other people。When somebody point out it ,you know where you are wrong。夏天一阵风4571 Glat to meet you here。 If you point out my mistake , it will be my pleasure。 By the other hand, I want to be your friend, OK?Then you can help me to improve my English。