今天下午刚作完的第2套模拟题目。请老师指导一下我的作文。非常感谢！小作文Dear Sir/Madam I'm writing to you to state my view that a chemical plant should be responsible for the water pollution in a nearby river.The present situation is not in good condition.Many chemical plants put garbage and waste liquids into nearby rivers before they are totally purified. The water becomes not clean and the fish which used to live in can be not seen. There are serveral measures which should be adopted. First,rules and laws should be designed.If chemical industries deviate these rules and laws,they should be punished heavily.Second,we should teach people to protect envioronment and tell them the harm if rivers are polluted.I think we will have a brighter and better tomorrow if we take these measures.大作文 As the set of bar charts pictures given depict,countries which their quantity of steel rank the front four positions are orderly China,Japan,American and Russion.China ranks first,accounting to 100,350,000 ton.The second position is Japan,up to 98,770,000 ton.American is lower than Japan ,which its quantity is 9,440,000 ton. Russion is the lowest in these countries,only 49,070,000 ton. It is clear that China has been the first in the world. There are many reasons to illustrate this phonomenon. In the first place, with the reform and openning-up policy being carried out,the economy in our country develops rapidly than before.This leads to increase greatly in steel. Secondly,the techonology develops at high speed which enable production to improve fastly.Finally,with the expansion of economy,the demand for steel increases greatly,which inspied steel industry product more and more steel to meet the need. All above reasons show that why the quantity of steel develop rapidly. As far as I predict,the quantity of steel in the word will decline gradually.Man will find better and cleaner energy to replace steel in order to diminish enviornment pollution.
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小作文应该可以得到7分, THE WATER BECOMES NOT CLEAN这种否定不符合英语的习惯, 大作文写的一般, 及格分左右, 闪光点少, 有明显的错误, 如:COUNTRIES WHICH THEIR QUALITY这个定语从句反映出你对定语从句还没有掌握. 你给人的感觉是没有什么话可以说, 内容不够丰富.