1.如果你想多了解一些他家房子的情况，请写信给我.More about If you wish know his house,please write to me.请问，我这么翻译可以吗？如果不行，请说出原因？？？谢谢！！！
热心网友
不可以，首先MORE ABOUT 放在IF前面就不合适，应该是MORE ABOUT HIS HOUSE，另外WISH后面应该接TO，不能直接加动词，你可以翻译成 IF YOU WANT（WISH） TO KNOW MORE ABOUT HIS HOUSE，PLEASE WRITE TO ME 或者IF YOU WANT（WISH）TO GET MORE INFORMATION ABOUT HIS HOUSE，PLEASE WRITE TO ME
热心网友
Please write to me if you want to know more information about his house.应把more about 放在know 后面。
热心网友
If you want to know more information about his house,please write to me. know ...about 是固定搭配 information 不可数名词不加s
热心网友
If you want more informations about his house,please send me a letter.
热心网友
If you need more information about his house,send me a letter please！
热心网友
If you wish to know more about his house ,please write to me.
热心网友
If you want to get more informations about his house,please write to me.