需要60个词的英语回答
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i have been studying english for four years and i have found in my experience that only through hard work can we succeed。whenistartedatthebegainning, teryears,icannotonlychatwithpeopleinenglish,butalsowritesomethinginenglish。so \"try and try until you succeed\" is the most important sentence i think。i have learned many things from my experience。1。（only在前，助动词提前,是倒装句） nd。。。that:句型,把in my experience 提前放在find后面保持句子平衡。至于用什么样的词汇与句型是本人的权利。不会因为你说用years later/much我就改成跟你一样。not only。。but also/你怕混淆,你可以不用,OK?但是不关我的事!并不是你认为的错误就是错误。是不是你的阅读量太小啊? please 先完善自己,然后点评别人!i still think that my english is not strong enough,but i don\'t think that my english is will be better in the future!i don\'t want to explain anything about these questions。可能有些地方拼写错误，语法错误。写的不完美。虽然依然有不同意见，但不想在继续讨论下去，也不想说是我的疏忽还是不会,还是哪里与你意见不同。我只能说即使我们说自己的本国语言，仍然会有许多不同的错误，仍然不可能达到完美，包括以语言为本职工作的人。无论你在哪个国家，说的是那国语言。如果说专门给别人挑错的话，谁都能做到。你写一篇，敢说你的作文里没有错误吗？作家每天的工作就是写作，也不敢说他写的东西里没有语法错误或拼写错误，那么是不是等我们都达到完美境界在开始写东西啊？呵呵 只是我的观点。这里有人敢说他的每个回答都是准确无误的吗？包括在这里回答问题的专职的英语老师。大家只是在这里交流学习而已，至于给出问题的人选择哪个答案，需要自己有一个判断能力。不是回答问题的人的责任。我觉得每个回答问题的人首先出发点是好的，另外就是都在认真回答。不然在这里回答问题还有什么其它的目的吗？如果认为不好可以不选。或者谁站出来告诉大家，以后就你来回答这类的问题。我们都向你学习。please wait for someone\'s perfact english composition !(请等待完美英语作文，不要选我的任何的作文。以免别人说我误人子弟。）。
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Forthosewhohavefunsinfindingotherpoeple' ,pleasefigureoutsomethingforthequestionifyoureallyhaveinterestsinhelpingotherpeople。Anyway,it'snottheauthor'sresponsibilitytochoosethebestanswer。Allwearedoinghereistogiveagoodanswertohelp。Second,noneofusisanativeEnglishspeaker。Pleasetrytobetolerant。Whenwehelpothers,wealsohelpourselves。Finally,Iknowthat谁的冷泪onlylearnedEnglishforfouryears。HowmanyyearshavewespentonEnglish?Canwewritesomethinglikeherafteronlyfouryearsself-taughstudyinEnglih?Sheisreallyagreatlady。Ifeelbadforthosewhothrewthesenonsensetoher!IadmirehersomuchandIbelievethatshewillbebetterandbetterlater。
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错误1:"and i have found in my experience "find后面需要加名词或代词。错误2:"only through hard work can we succeed"顺序错误,应该是only through hard work we can succeed。最好的表达方式是:we can only succeed through hard work。错误3:"when i started at the begainning"at the begainning与start语义重复。。。。错误4:"that i think i can not went on it"can not后接动词原型,用go而不是went。 而且go on后不能接名词或代词,该把it删掉。错误5:"after years,i can not only chat with people in english, "正确语句:Years later, I can't even chat with others in English。(最好能注意一下大小写)此处用not only, but also不适合,语义容易混淆。错误6:i have learned many things from my experience一般学到的东西用much比较好,不适合用many things。最后一段最好改为:So I think "Try and try until you succeed" is the most important sentence。 I have learned much(a lot) from/in my experience(那个拼写错误怎么不见了? 我记得有个english你好像多打上了一个字母)。