或者还应该增加什么？？？My name is dasha.I'm twenty year.I work at XXX,I'm form in beijing.I was born on august 5I enjoy a football,a basketball and computer,one of them enjoy computer the best.I want to be fashion designer.
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My name is dasha.I'm twenty years old. I work at XXX,I'm from beijing.I was born on August 5th.I enjoy playing football,basketball and computer,but I like computer best.(我想楼主的意思是说在足球、篮球、电脑这三项中，他最喜欢的是电脑，而不是说他朋友最喜欢什么）. I want to be a fashion designer.
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Poor English!My name is Dasha.I'm twenty years old.I work at XXX(in yyy company),I'm from beijing.I was born on August 5th.I enjoy playing football, basketball and computer. One of my friend enjoys computer the best.I want to be a fashion designer.