To:WhomitmayconocernDearsirs,We,KoreaShipmanagers.HerebyconfirmthefollowingcrewwasintheemployofourshipwhichnamedWooallVictory,( ,055G/T,3400KW)from24thJun.,2004to6thJul.,2005.Pleasekindlyallowhisrequestforthetrainingofwatchkeeping.N :12,Jul.,1979 ’sYoursverytruly14th,Nov,2005
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1)注意拼写:ToWhomitmayconcern("conocern"错,To的后面不用冒号。)2)正文部分按照vivian的为正规行文用语。3)日期放在开头的右上角。整篇行文:14Nov。,2005ToWhomitmayconcernDearsirs,We,KoreaShipmanagers,herebyconfirmthefollowingperson/seamanwasintheemploymentofourship,MT/MVWooallVictory( ,055G/T,3400KW),from24thJun。,2004to6thJul。,2005。Pleasekindlygivepermittancetohisapplyforthetrainingofwatchkeeping。Yourstruly,XXX(打印)xxx(手签)XXXXXX(职务)XXXXXX(单位名) :E-amil:(电话,传真和电邮如果方便,最好提供。)。
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,Nov,2005TOWHOMITMAYCONCERNDearsirs,WearethefleetcontrolmanagerofaKoreanshippingcompany.HerebyconfirmthepersonlistedbelowwasemployedinourshipnamedWooallVictory,(Gro ,055G/T,3400KW)from24thJun.,2004to6thJul., a(他的职位名称).Pleasekindlyprovidehimasecurityguardtrainingcourseasreqested. :12,July,1979 'sPassportno.:EA-E02BC01110801Thankyouforyourattention.Yoursfaithfully,________________
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We,KoreaShipmanagers,herebyconfirmthefollowingperson/seamanwasintheemploymentofourship,MT/MVWooallVictory( ,055G/T,3400KW),from24thJun.,2004to6thJul.,2005.Pleasekindlygivepermittancetohisapplyforthetrainingofwatchkeeping.我根据大意对主要部分作了些改动,最后一个词watchkeeping不明白是什么意思,还请指教。
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我觉得就只有our ship which named Wooall Victory的which named 中间加上is就好`