Physical exercises With the development of economy and the higher lever of living, more and more people are gradually aware of the importance of physical exercises, through which people can get stronger and healthier, and have more power to study and work. Many studies show that people who do more physical exercises can live longer than those who are lazy to moving. There are so many methods of physical exercises, such as dancing, playing, running and jogging and like. Those who love music can dance with music rhyme; others who like challenge may choose playing, such as football or tennis; likewise, people who long for peace could just run or jog. Among these methods, I think I like dancing best, and playing is not bad. I often dance at home, usually the hall of my room. Sometimes I go to keeping fit central. I play tennis with my husband and friends, though my skills are not so good.
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楼主写得不错,用词丰富,基本无语法错误。我这里提出一些用词用语有欠妥当的地方以供参考:1。Physicalexercises--Physicalexercise这里谈体育锻炼这一整体,不必用复数。 egradual ,throughwhichpeoplecangetstrongerandhealthier,--:Itcanmakethemstrongerandhealthier。这里用through作转折并不算错,但整个句子就太冗长了,不清晰。所以用:断开,另起一句来解说。and前不用逗号。 osewhoarelazytomoving--th manymethodsofphysicalexercises,suchas--somanywayst ,joggingandmuchmore。12。withmusicrhyme--withmusic13。otherswholikechallengemaychooseplaying--otherswholovechallengescanchoosetoplayacompetitivegame14。longforpeace--preferpeace。longfor语气有些太强了。 ehallofmyroom--inmyroom。hall是大厅,比room大。 skillsarenotsogood--I'mnotverygoodatit。
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有点点Chinese english的味道 但总体还是不错among these methods 最好换成of all the methods还有 usually in the hall of my housekeeping fit central 改为 fit-keeping center