从严冷枯黄的北方归来,看到展现在我眼前的青山碧水,红花绿叶,使我惊讶而欢喜! 我觉得我的生命的风帆,已从蔚蓝的海,驶进了碧绿的江.
热心网友
Back from cold and withered NorthTo dark mountains and clear riversHere in the blooming warm paradise The green leaves and pretty flowersMake me delighted with surprise I feel my life's started to sailTo the jade-like riverFrom the cerulean sea **************承蒙十月大师的垂青，有幸聆听大师的教诲，现按大师的意思更改。仍有部分未能够尽意，还请大师能拈花示义。***************再按大师的斧正，我已经找不到我原来的文字的影子啦！哈哈！我看这篇是你的啦！就当送给我吧！：）。
热心网友
Return from the north of strict and cold and withered Huang, see the display in my t present green mountain bluish green water, the red flower greenery, make me surprised and happy! I feel the sail of boat of my life, already from the sea of the deep blue, drive into the verdant river.
热心网友
I was surpried and glad to see beatiful natural scene in front of me,when I come back from chilliness north.I feel the sailboat of my life has bounded for green river from blue ocean.