吴教授请帮忙看看作文,看能得多少分!急!谢谢!各位大侠也请不吝指教!作文全文如下:请您指教,谢谢! It is goes without saying that"more confidence,more success."First of all,I have confident to win the election.Then,from primary school to mid-school,I always act as the role of the chairman of student union,so,I accumulated many experience and execised my lead skill and improve the ability of solving problems.Furthermore,I love the job,I like to afford the responsibility and I hope to sevice many students.Finally,I hope the election will be equall. If I win,to be a chairman,I will do thing that students want to do,do thing benift students a lot.I hope everyone can vote for me.Thank you!

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It goes without saying that"the more confidence(you have),the more success(you will get)。"I run for chairman of the student union for three reasons。First of all,I have confidence to win the cond,from primary school to mid-school,I always act as the role of the chairman of student union,so,I have accumulated much experience and execised my leading skill and improved the ability of solving problems。Furthermore,I love the job,I like to take the responsibility and I hope I can serve many students。Finally,I hope the election will be equal。If I win,I will do things that students want me to do,which will benifit them a lot。I hope everyone can vote for me。Thank you!有些小错误或用词不当,已直接改过,from primary school to mid-school,I always act as the role of the chairman of student union,词句不太合情理,primary school 不设学生会主席。可直接说:I have been leaders of the students all the time。 "开头引用可以,但还差一句主题句或启的句子'" 总之,全文还算涵盖了要求的要点,这些小错误也不影响表达,估计6--10分。附:三、评分原则1。 大学英语考试的目的是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求,对作文的评分应以此要求为准则。2。 大学英语考试作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。3。 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容,而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题,是否充分表达思想,也要考虑是否用英语清楚而适切地表达思想,也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。4。 避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分,包括满分;该给低分的给低分,包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。四、评分标准1。 短文写作部分满分为15分。2。 阅卷标准共分五等:14分、11分、8分、5分、及2分。各有参照卷一至二份。3。 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照参照卷评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似,即定为该分数(即8分);若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数,则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分),但不得加或减半分。l 给分档14分—— 切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。11分—— 切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。8分 —— 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚, 文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。5分 —— 基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。2分 —— 条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。。

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It goes without saying that"the more confidence(you have),the more success(you will get)。"I run for chairman of the student union for three reasons。First of all,I have confidence to win the cond,from primary school to mid-school,I always act as the role of the chairman of student union,so,I have accumulated much experience and execised my leading skill and improved the ability of solving problems。Furthermore,I love the job,I like to take the responsibility and I hope I can serve many students。Finally,I hope the election will be equal。If I win,I will do things that students want me to do,which will benifit them a lot。I hope everyone can vote for me。Thank you!有些小错误或用词不当,已直接改过,from primary school to mid-school,I always act as the role of the chairman of student union,词句不太合情理,primary school 不设学生会主席。可直接说:I have been leaders of the students all the time。"开头引用可以,但还差一句主题句或启的句子'"总之,全文还算涵盖了要求的要点,这些小错误也不影响表达,估计6--10分。附:三、评分原则1。 大学英语考试的目的是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求,对作文的评分应以此要求为准则。2。 大学英语考试作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。3。 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容,而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题,是否充分表达思想,也要考虑是否用英语清楚而适切地表达思想,也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。4。 避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分,包括满分;该给低分的给低分,包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。四、评分标准1。 短文写作部分满分为15分。2。 阅卷标准共分五等:14分、11分、8分、5分、及2分。各有参照卷一至二份。3。 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照参照卷评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似,即定为该分数(即8分);若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数,则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分),但不得加或减半分。l 给分档14分—— 切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。11分—— 切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。8分 —— 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚, 文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。5分 —— 基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。。

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格式呢? 就文章来说 我以10来说 我会给你6分 问题不少,句子的结构还有一些用词都有问题 如果你没有格式,那就只能算偏题了 不会很高